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Wednesday, 26 March 2014
Who Am I poem
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
A great descriptive poem using personification, simile and alliteration.
The only error was in the start of your sentence
'My interests is' this should be singular 'My interest is' . You can correct this. You have used a plural when you are only talking about one thing - computer games.
Your next step is to use these language features in your recount or narrative writing.
1 comment:
A great descriptive poem using personification, simile and alliteration.
The only error was in the start of your sentence
'My interests is' this should be singular 'My interest is' . You can correct this. You have used a plural when you are only talking about one thing - computer games.
Your next step is to use these language features in your recount or narrative writing.
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