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Wednesday, 16 April 2014
Gallipoli Christmas Letter
2 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Well done Cindy. You wrote a wonderful letter and re-told the story of this special Christmas in WW1 well. I think your next steps are to work on your grammar so your tense is correct throughout your work.
I was learning to write a letter about Christmas day at war. I was able to understand how it felt to be at war which made it really easy to write my letter. Next time I would try to make my letter more descriptive to make it more interesting.
2 comments:
Well done Cindy. You wrote a wonderful letter and re-told the story of this special Christmas in WW1 well. I think your next steps are to work on your grammar so your tense is correct throughout your work.
MH
I was learning to write a letter about Christmas day at war. I was able to understand how it felt to be at war which made it really easy to write my letter. Next time I would try to make my letter more descriptive to make it more interesting.
Cindy
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