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Friday, 31 October 2014
10 Things Found in Cinderella's Pocket
2 comments:
Anonymous
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I was learning to use adjectives in my poem. I found it hard to look for different words in the thesaurus. Next time I would use more adjectives in my poems.
Good effort with the short poem. Next time you might want to include some more figurative language e.g metaphors.
Also a rule for the future to remember. Whenever you have a word that starts with a vowel like 'invitation' the word preceding it cannot 'a' invitation. You need to use 'an' invitation.
2 comments:
I was learning to use adjectives in my poem. I found it hard to look for different words in the thesaurus. Next time I would use more adjectives in my poems.
Good effort with the short poem. Next time you might want to include some more figurative language e.g metaphors.
Also a rule for the future to remember. Whenever you have a word that starts with a vowel like 'invitation' the word preceding it cannot 'a' invitation. You need to use 'an' invitation.
Miss H
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